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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2002-10-03 11:45 PM




push and pull
tidal wave cometh
shanty homes boarded up
eye of the storm watches another coast
the local salutes its wind with a toast

you will read it in the paper
cyclone hits huricane speed
publicity has needs
wind get titled
bounces out of its cradle
and howls at short notice


push and pull with tropical ease
locals cart their goods..if you please
surf wave carves its notch
Cuban tourist drinks a scotch
shanty home's boards burst away
enter unabated winds...ocean spray


stay tuned for summaries in the news
coverage of the wind and rain
remember the plain of Spain
was it anything like this?

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (10-03-2002 11:50 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-10-03 11:51 PM




Oh Martin, last time I heard about the hurricane it was at Category 4 and with winds 140 M.P.H and increasing! I hope soon it dies down, though it looks like it can cost many millions more dollars in damage before it does! My heart goes out to all those evacuating and near the coast tonight, sweet friend, we all love you so much! Youn have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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