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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-10-03 10:47 PM


“GATHERING”

Sweep me into
your gentle arms,
as I have fallen
from a branch
to walk together,
stroll on the path
of forever, yet while
we do I would
hold you tight,
touch you, and whisper
words until it felt
divine, like the
breeze touching
the leaves when
they fell from
the trees, and
sang a song
for you…
~~~~

by Bill Charles…


© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-03 10:51 PM




(sigh) This is so beautifully touching, sweet friend, and may this love sweep you off your feet and caress your soul like a zephyr in the heart of a bird-hatching robin caroling spring! (big hugggsssss) You always gather such magic in your words, sweet friend, I love it my blues brother, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-10-03 10:51 PM


WOW Bill!!!  Talk about a *SIGH* song!
Oh myyyyy...wonderful!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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3 posted 2002-10-03 10:54 PM


Bill you are a charmer!! I hope this lucky lady you have knows what a catch she got!! *sigh* I wonder if you could give my husband a few pointers?!! Keep up the great works. We love ya'!
Tammy

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4 posted 2002-10-03 10:56 PM


OH BC....yet again...you write such passion
with the flames flickering around the heels..

NewEnglandlazurlu
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5 posted 2002-10-04 09:03 AM


'stroll on the path of forever...'

Ooooh my, ooooh my! You do write the most romantic words. Ahhhhhh, sighing with contentment!!!

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

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6 posted 2002-10-04 10:04 AM


Bill - This is beautiful. Sighing...Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Pilgrimage
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7 posted 2002-10-04 11:09 AM


This is peaceful and gentle, and I love it.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

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8 posted 2002-10-04 12:00 PM


The song that you have just sung, sings in my soul.

EA

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9 posted 2002-10-04 12:25 PM


well...who is falling now? giggle
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10 posted 2002-10-05 09:12 AM


*sigh* oh Bill this is sooooo beautifully done, think I'm falling here.....

(((hugs)))
Charisma

Martie
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11 posted 2002-10-05 10:35 AM


Bill

This is beautiful and reads like a song...one of your best!

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12 posted 2002-10-05 10:44 AM


Bill, I love the way you "sing"  to your love. Really beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

With Love,
Ethel.....garysgirl

vandana
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13 posted 2002-10-05 08:53 PM


liked it
ShadowRider
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14 posted 2002-10-08 09:05 PM


With an anxious romantic ear
I listen to your romantic voice
swept into the lull
of a great love lullaby.

jkf

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15 posted 2002-10-08 09:12 PM



So your leaves
sing, too?
Good to know...!

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