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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-10-03 10:30 PM


“WAITING FOR YOU”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Three days, three weeks,
three months,
lonely days carry
on through space…
Yet they pass,
one by one,
by another…
Closer to be,
until your gentle
embrace…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-10-03 10:33 PM




(big hugggssssss) Yes, and I know soon the wait will always be over and without a times end love will be yours to cherish forever! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-03-2002 10:34 PM).]

Enchantress
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2 posted 2002-10-03 10:35 PM


BC~I wish you all the best when she arrives.  Lovely write.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Martie
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3 posted 2002-10-03 10:35 PM


Bill

Sounds like a sweet anticipation.  

1slick_lady
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4 posted 2002-10-03 10:57 PM


don't worry dear...i will be there soon...helen
caterina
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5 posted 2002-10-03 11:06 PM



This was lovely Bill. I liked how you took the days, weeks and months and narrowed it right down to that embrace.  Short poems are always a challenge and I think this one is really well done.

caterina


Tammy Blessing
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6 posted 2002-10-03 11:10 PM


Waiting can be unbearable, but anticipation can be awe inspiring. Or in this case..poetically inspiring. Wonderful write! You are, as always, the CHARMER!!
Tammy

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2002-10-04 04:32 AM


Seems like I'm always waiting...James
NewEnglandlazurlu
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8 posted 2002-10-04 10:11 AM


BC ~~ I hope she comes to you soon. Waiting can be so difficult.

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2002-10-04 11:59 AM


It has been an experience that good things come to those who wait.  Well done Bill.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2002-10-04 12:08 PM


Some say, "Out of sight, out of mind".
Others say, "Absence makes the heart grow fonder".

I think you and I agree with what the "others" say.

You're reunion should well be worth the wait!

EA

ThisDiamond
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11 posted 2002-10-04 12:09 PM


Compliments to your warm style and gentle feelings. Sounds like a brew to be perfected in the future...nearer than farther my friend. ThisDiamond
WhiteRose
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12 posted 2002-10-04 12:10 PM


Simply beautiful Bill!
Toerag
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13 posted 2002-10-04 12:12 PM


Absence makes the heart grow fonder...and one's mind does wander...good write Bill
garysgirl
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14 posted 2002-10-04 01:14 PM


Bill, my Gary and I have a long distance relationship. It is well worth the wait when we do get to see each other, though. I liked the way you put it into such a few words. Your poems sound like they are really from the heart. Thanks.  Ethel
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