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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-10-03 07:35 PM



Falling

gather me
like fallen leaves
how I shy
away from trees
come and feel me
bunch and pile
tenderly walk
through me awhile
stay with me
we can sit and roll
touch has a way
to console
we somersault
upon the grass
breezing through play
this game won’t last
soon I will be a different
fallen song sung
changed to tickle you
as snowflake upon your tongue

I’m not disappointed,  I never expected anything from you.

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-10-03 07:58 PM


Helen...I love the way this tumbled down the page..
from fall leaves to winter snowflakes.
Lovely...simply lovely.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Sandpiper
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since 2002-06-15
Posts 738
land of flora and fauna
2 posted 2002-10-03 08:16 PM


Enchanting!
Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-10-03 11:04 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I just love how your wonderful words metamorphosize, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, this touched my heart like the kiss of a snowflake, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2002-10-03 11:05 PM


helen - leaves to gather, walks to take.  A gathering of thoughts...

BC

Tammy Blessing
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since 2002-08-26
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5 posted 2002-10-03 11:29 PM


AWESOME!! BRAVO!! I LOVE fall and you write it so well...
Peace,love, and happiness
Tammy

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