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regards2you
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0 posted 2002-10-03 12:22 PM




Who's charming my psyche,
laughing right in my heart?
Cooing, coaxing, caring,
as I'm ripped apart?

Who absorbs my sorrow;
dissolves my sense of doom?
Leads me through a fear field,
where insanity blooms!

Who wrote my own life's manuscript
each verse, each page, each chapter
Who left out many kinds of love,
and left out lots of laughter?

Faith, trust and hope's in place,
one lesson left for me.
Bended knees, happy-faced,
Thank God, I've learned
.....Humility.....

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

© Copyright 2002 Patricia L.Thompson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-03 01:09 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, you are already a wonderful sister to us all in our poetic family, sweet friend, you bring such great warmth and humility in your words here! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-10-03 01:14 PM


regards2you

Interesting feeling of thorns and flowers, light and dark.  Enjoyed!

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yes...sigh
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