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DELICIOUSNESS

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Isn't that
a wonderful word?

The deliciousness of feeling good.
The deliciousness of making love.
The deliciousness of learning.

The word: deliciousness,
  makes me feel happy.

Warm and cozy. Full belly comfort.

  Gratification at its best!

Oh, I get shivery just thinking
about all the things
it conjures up in my mind.

      Deliciousness,
      makes me smile

without surrender, be on good terms with all persons...

© Copyright 2002 Patricia L.Thompson - All Rights Reserved
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Now you've made me hungry.  Welcome to Passions!  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
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regards2you,
"Deliciousness," Goes as deep as your control
Sy

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Welcome to Passions!
Very nice first post!
I will be looking for more of your work.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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Welcome to Passions!! Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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(giggles in delight) And this is a beautifulicating deliciousness and lusciousness debut, sweet friend, yayness! (big hugggsssss) Welcome to Passions, sweet Patricia, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your preciousness words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Pat,
you know what? this made me smile too...

Ditto and belated welcome to passions!
regards2you
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Kaile,

Thanks, It was my first post, and this really is one of my favorite poems....no matter if it didn't go over well.

Every time I read it, it makes me smile, and feel excited about living!
Corny, though it may be.....

It was written 20+ years ago, after having come through some really difficult problems w. a man who went off the deep end, so to speak....

when that was all finally over, this was one of the first poems I wrote....
I was glad just to be alive....

Everything was like the deliciousness of living....

thanks for responding...and for the welcome...smiling here...hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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Gosh Pat, you replied fast!

i just wanted to come back and make a cheesy, though heartfelt remark about how there is deliciousness in reading your poetry and long thoughtful replies...not everyone can put in her heart and soul when replying to other people's poems

nay, feeling excited about living is one of the best feelings to have..and it needs no validation by anything of the sort, so how can it be corny?

hmm, thanks for showing us the thought-processes that went into creating this poem...makes me have deeper insights into this piece...

here's a toast to the deliciousness of living!

[This message has been edited by kaile (01-12-2003 01:42 AM).]

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Nice...when I'm hungry for love I just say Yum...James
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Well, James, can't say I completely understand your reply in relation to this poem, but that is okay.

This is simply about joy of living and appreciation and gladness of being alive. A wonderful feeling and has nothing to do with losing control....

Thanks for your comments James....

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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