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Thomas119gold
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since 2002-06-03
Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

0 posted 2002-10-03 10:13 AM



Close my eyes
life goes on forget the past
I have reminiscence my last

about a lopsided romance
a single sided infatuation
of disproportionate adoration

Behold what my future has foretold
love without hate an actually complement
of enchantment comparing to two turtle doves
locked in eternal love

this is why I will not hesitate
to wrap myself with this precious angel
and wait for these turbulent times to abate



© Copyright 2002 Thomas Goldsworthy - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2002-10-03 10:36 AM


seems like you have a plan...

I enjoyed the rhyme scheme

M

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