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Ode To The Dawn (sonnet)
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Ode To The Dawn (sonnet) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Ode To The Dawn  Did you see the sun rise this morn? Rising in glory a new day was born. The night eased away with the coming dawn, in a magical moment the night was gone. As the orange orb greeted the sky I beheld the wonderment with my eyes. A soft blanket of light covered the earth. I had witnessed the dawn at its birth. Then Mother Nature on timely cue painted the skies in brilliant hues. Colors melded together on canvas of light a breathtaking view was held in sight. Did you take a moment to stop and see the grande awakening of life to be? (c)dmsmith 10-03-02 If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-03-2002 05:54 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful morning write here Donna. It's raining here...but still, the dawn is so special.. ~Hugs sweet poetess~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The night eased away with the coming dawn, in a magical moment the night was gone. ================================ love the simple yet glorious beauty of those thoughts and images... this is lovely Donna...as always your cadence is a pleasure to read aloud. Beautiful serene write.  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay!!! Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, your beautiful words always paint the colors of morning so well! (kiss on cheek) This is spellbinding, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Beautiful Donna. I was looking this morning, but we've got a real overcast, ominous looking sky this day. Have a good day, hugs, Marti |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Donna, this is so incredibly lovely. Truly! The mood, the rhythm, the images, the feeling....everything! I love it! P.S. Great photo! You're pretty as a picture! ~ May the dawn give way to a beautiful day!~ Linda |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Lovely ode to the wonder of nature. Enjoyed the read. Deb |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is so pretty. You are an artist painting with words. Just beautiful. It is grey here, so this makes my day! without surrender, be on good terms with all persons... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is so pretty. You are an artist painting with words. Just beautiful. It is grey here, so this makes my day! without surrender, be on good terms with all persons... |
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iluvhellokitty21 New Member
since 2002-09-24
Posts 8USA |
lovely poem dear! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very beautiful words and scene you painted. I must be getting up too late to see the beautiful sunrising. I am still trying to get rested from the Florida trip. hugs M |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna Yes, I saw it creep across the floor from the door into the garden. You have written it so beautifully! |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
I did, yes, but not like this. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit A beautiful sail on a soft sea and a blue sky enjoyed. |
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texasrose Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 146 |
This makes me yearn for the morning to come quickly. Dawn in Texas is a beautiful pallet of colors. Enjoyed your sights. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
A new day, new beginning...and we have a choice to make this day what we want it to be...I love this one, Donna...it's truly quite lovely. |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
A lovely poem and this beautiful picture gives it just the right touch! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Donna, this is so beautiful. As I was reading this, I could almost see the sun rising ....even though it's almost time for the sunset. The picture is pretty, too. Thanks. Ethel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Truly as beautiful as the content here. ThisDiamond |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful!!!! Charisma |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very very beautiful! |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
This is worth the second read Donna. So very beautiful! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Geez, I've been that busy that I just now realized I haven't been back to this write to thank you all. You all have left such wonderful comments and I wish I had the time to reply to each in turn but time is limited today so I will just tell you all how much you are appreciated and send a hug. Peace to poetry land. Sincerely, Donna If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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