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0 posted 2002-10-02 10:49 PM





Steeping deep
In midnight pools
Of restless thought
Where two souls
Are dreamless sought
Bound by Fate’s
Turn of event
This sleepless night
Together spent
Crossing bridges
Yet unmade
In mind’s eye
Go unafraid
Here, let hearts
And souls combine
Mingle thoughts
Intertwine….
Touch that ever
Shall transcend
Until forever
Comes to an end


~SEA~



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1 posted 2002-10-02 10:57 PM


Sue, the more I read from you..
the more I realize how much you have been missed here.
Wonderful writing...just superb.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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2 posted 2002-10-02 10:58 PM




(smiles) Oh Susan, I love this, sweet friend, this is soooooo beautiful, may you and your love cross into eternity's forever always, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-10-02 11:00 PM


*again jaw drops to the floor, quickly picks up and walks out the door* dang!!! Wonderful you just don't know!! no yeah seriously considered yourself fuzzed

Consider yourself fuzzed

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4 posted 2002-10-02 11:10 PM


Nancy~ awww, you are the best, thank you

Noah~ big smiles and warm hugs to you, thank you

Fuzzy~ wow! cool! thanks a bunch

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5 posted 2002-10-02 11:49 PM


love the art and the pic.  

Tom

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6 posted 2002-10-03 12:06 PM


Wow, and I thought my soul was flowing.
Thank you for giving this.

"If there is any doubt about it there is no doubt about it." Linnie Stanton


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7 posted 2002-10-03 06:21 AM


So these two souls got a chance to be together for the night once again, how sweet and special is that??? It was their fate that led them there together once more. Kinda reminds me of the movie Ghost. i liked this poem. havent been here a long while and this poem was welcoming. thanks for the read.


"Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb

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8 posted 2002-10-03 09:52 AM


I love the picture and your words fit it perfectly. Wonderful write. I am so glad you have returned.

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

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9 posted 2002-10-03 03:47 PM


Susan,
While looking at the eye,
the eye
looks back.

Loved this.

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10 posted 2002-10-03 03:56 PM


Sea

You captured the souls touch, with perfect rhythm.  Beautiful!

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11 posted 2002-10-03 03:58 PM


nicely done my friend... as always a touch of words that touch deep.
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12 posted 2002-10-03 04:48 PM


Sea, this is why you are one of my favorite poets to read.  Absolutely wonderful writing. But from you, I would expect no less!
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13 posted 2002-10-03 10:43 PM


You know I love this one.   
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14 posted 2002-10-03 11:01 PM


SEA - you're writings are just, well just, h'mmmm, well just though provoking. Me hopes though that forever is forever...

BC

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15 posted 2002-10-04 12:16 PM


Tom~ thank you!

Don~ thank you for the wow, very cool

Rosalind~ yes! and thank you

Marti~ that is very sweet of you thank you!

Mike~ you are awesome, thanks

Martie~ thank you for reading and liking, that means a lot to me!

Ron~ thank you

Tara~ thank you!!

Michael~ thank you dear friend

BC~ me too, thanks!


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16 posted 2002-10-04 12:43 PM


Sue,
I like your reason for a sleepless night much better! Nice write.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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17 posted 2002-10-04 12:46 PM


thank you Larry
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18 posted 2002-10-04 01:06 AM


Hello Susan

This was absolutely beautiful and it is so nice to be able to read your words once again.  I'm sure you have been missed by many and I hope all is well with you.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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19 posted 2002-10-04 01:07 AM


thank you Sue, and yes, things with me are great!
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20 posted 2002-10-05 12:18 PM


Hi Sea,

Have not been around much and this is such a awesome poem to start my visit off, wow hope to see more beauty's like this.

Love, Cerenity

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21 posted 2002-10-05 12:42 PM


Hello, Sea. This is very, very touching. I liked it so much. Thank you for sharing your poetry.
Love,
Ethel....garysgirl

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22 posted 2002-10-05 12:51 PM


"Touch that ever
Shall transcend
Until forever
Comes to an end"

And the tides of the SEA wash over us once again with tender thoughts.
Thank you, Susan, for sharing your heart.



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23 posted 2002-10-05 06:20 AM


Once again you share a beauty with us....enjoyed it very very much

((hugs))
Charisma

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24 posted 2002-10-05 08:55 PM


nice
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25 posted 2002-10-05 09:32 PM


Touch that ever
Shall transcend
Until forever
Comes to an end

Beautifully expressed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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