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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-10-02 06:56 PM


  From A Touch Of...


Silent are the feel of words
barely touching the me within
yet whetting the appetite for you...
Perhaps the moisture seeps in
leaving a damp memory
of a time once held
in the embrace of stillness
gently muting my existence

With a gesture of words, may my
opponents be silenced, may all
criticism cease, as I absorb
from others who soften, to deaden thoughts
that hang on, clinging to my without
as I let loose of my grasp of yesterday
to neutralize and balance in harmonious design
a new tomorrow, to soon be my today.
M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
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1 posted 2002-10-02 06:58 PM


'a damp memory'-I have some of those. Well-written.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

vandana
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2 posted 2002-10-02 06:59 PM


enjoyed
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2002-10-02 07:02 PM


Nan of the Pilgrim variety  

hugssssss and thanks..it has been a long time for me (those damp memories)..oh well...

M

Thank you Vandana for  reading and responding

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (10-02-2002 07:17 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-10-02 07:48 PM


Maureen,
Good thoughts, good write, good read.

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2002-10-02 07:51 PM


MsWynter~
This is so you ... and so lovely~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2002-10-02 09:27 PM


Thank you Sy..now I can feel your words as well as read them...I loved meeting both you and Isabel give her a big hug from me

Marge...I am just in a relaxed mode..wondering how to put all of those Florida experiences into words, so for now I am just writing thoughts of me...

I am sort of self absorbed..trying to get into a routine again.

Many hugssssssss
to you and that Singing/guitar playing guy of yours
M

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