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WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-10-02 06:24 PM



I remember your exploration of skin.
Enjoying the topography of my body
placed upon palm, etched as sweat
in droplets escaped the pores.
Now the memory of me is forever
a part of your touch, imprinted
upon your hands for future reference.

WhiteRose

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2002-10-02 06:37 PM


WR, this really made me smile in remembering the same feelings expressed once or twice in my own poems  

M

caterina
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2 posted 2002-10-02 06:47 PM



You have a nice gentle way with words White Rose, this was lovely.

caterina


Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2002-10-02 06:57 PM


You have a compelling way with words that makes me want to read your poems twice or more!

~ and may he never forget this sweet rose of white! ~

EA

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2002-10-02 09:04 PM


WhiteRose - warm this is, nice tender words...

BC

fishop
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5 posted 2002-10-02 09:31 PM


Oh I like where this one took my head.  I must go explore some topography now. Thanks for sharing.  

Tom    

Krishankins
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6 posted 2002-10-02 09:59 PM


Nice piece! I like the use of the word "topography". It works well here!!!!!



Kris

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2002-10-02 11:41 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I too love the topographical sense you give your words! (kiss on cheek) This is delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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