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That Woman
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That Woman |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Some day I will be that woman, the one who haunts my dreams. Right now I am just her shadow turning corners, fearing the emotions, tattered by her past, searching for unconditional love, but trusting no one, pretending often in the belief of herself. Some day I will be that woman, eyes shining brightly, able to melt his heart. Every day will have a glow of sunshine, to part the gray and every night will share a purple heaven phased by the moon, no more fallout, just moments etched in reality, dressing me in wonderment, placing me in the hands of time, Never to feel the lonely or emptiness again. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
someday I am sure you will be me friend... wanting to be is the first step in recognizing what it is you have to do in order to be what it is you want... |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
That is one beautiful poem you wrote here Maureen. You may feel lonesome once in a while, but you will be never alone, you've made 13 friends that weekend in Tampa. Love and Hugs to you my friend, Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Cpat..I agree...  Titia, I am so tired I can't even begin to write all that is going through my mind yet. I need quiet to write and this is the first I have been home since I managed to lose my car at the airport parking lot and had to spend an extra night away from home... and guess where I ate breakfast?  Yup..Denny'shugsssss M |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - you are that woman now, pretty as a rose in the mornings sun... BC |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I echo Bill's thoughts, dreams can come real if we have the belief. Beautifully written. El riesgo vive siempre! |
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fishop Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 79ohio |
Trust and belief these are the keys to lasting love with loving memories Tom |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like the messages I am reading in this lovely, Maureen... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Look at the bright side, Maureen. At least you're out of the closet! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Read your replies again! You are very well thought of! This was a lovely, yet lonely, poem. From your personal experiences you pull out all the raw emotion and put it down on paper so effectively. Take care sweet poetess! Linda |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such strength to speak the truth of what you feel. Conveyed so well here...you are that woman. ThisDiamond |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Bill you are one of the few I have ever met...and a favorite I might add...thank you hugss M brian, I have faith in the future and am just expressing the present. Thank you for your kind words...I appreciate them Tom, yes trust and belief have left me with fond memories and now I am ready to have some new ones. Thank you ~smiling M Karilea, you would have loved this meeting in Florida, thank you for your response. Hmmm Deer...I almost asked for a closet at the hotel desk last night, I forgot what it felt like to sleep in a bed. By the way you spelled my name two different ways in your picture album...the first was correct.I have yet to put the pics I have of you and the sinkhole you fell into..but they will be seen as soon as the poems are posted. Linda, thank you for your responses. I write as I feel. Some days it is hopeful and content and other days it's all I can do to make the day go by faster. It will all even out eventually. ThisDiamond, I always write the truth of feelings and some times it comes across worse than it is. I am working towards those happy poems...and it shouldn't be too much longer and my life will leave behind the memories that need to be forgotten. Thank You ~smiling Maureen... yes Balladeer it's M A U R E E N [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (10-02-2002 10:44 PM).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Yep, that I know...clumsy fingers made the mistake, I guess Can't wait to see your pics  New pic of you is good...still doesn't do you justice |
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Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England |
"Every day will have a glow of sunshine, to part the gray and every night will share a purple heaven phased by the moon" Loved this part of the second stanza, wonderful write Sammie ^i^ |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
...wonderful emotions... Keep counting your blessings |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Maureen, keep reaching hon, the light does get brighter. Some times it seems as though it never will......then it starts to shine a lil more each day......from inside. Hugs and may you feel peace soon. And I agree with deer, your pic don't do you justice. Hugs. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Capture those moments that dwell in your heart, then it becomes... you. Lovely poem. Deb |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
"able to melt his heart" that leads me to believe a love unreturned inspired this introspective write. And that pulls at the heart. Brave emotions shown here...yes brave... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Maureen, you're already halfway there to becoming the person you want to be. I know, I saw her emerging and opening like a rose at the Florida meet. Heart HuGS Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling heart you know that this is beautiful and as for having someone in my cupboard I'd rather it was you than almost anyone one else. and thank you for the cooking if not for you we would have been very hungry poets See you soon Love as always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
And I believe you will be, because I think you already are and just haven't realized it yet. Great write! |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
You are that woman. This is a lovely write about longing to be what we dream. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Balladeer, It's ok if you call me Murine, Mo, or spell it wrong..I answer to many things..and just you wait..when I have the energy and post the pics...especially your fall from grace And thank you for the compliment..I actually think this picture on here is pretty good, but then again I need glasses to see anything close up now *sSamantha, Thank you for reading and leaving a lovely response, I am a Moonchild and feel connected to it. Maureen mycafe, I count my blessings daily, thank you. Donna, I wish I had your confidence, but you are so far ahead of me...they say it takes time and I do know that time is on my side. Thank you for the compliment about the picture...yours doesn't do you justice either. hugsssss M |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
This is good maureen, and the picture is just fine also...... by the way you are already there!!!! you are that woman. Bernie [This message has been edited by bslicker (10-04-2002 10:53 AM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Deb, such a lovely poetic response Thank You M scorpio, well a love not felt may be more like it, but I am always fantasizing anyway. Nothing's perfect even if I wish it to be or thought it could be. You are very perceptive thank you for your response, Maureen Hi there Keth...are you still piloting the roads? I really miss all of you already. I hope your next weeks are as much fun as the one we had together.I love those heart hugsssss sending them back Maureen Marsha, haaaa I have had fun in telling all here about my sleeping quarters...I tell them it could have been worse, I could have slept in the tub, actually I think I had the best accommodations hugs and many thanks for a wonderful week, one I will never forget! love you M Michael,thank you for the visit and the Kind words. *s WhiteRose, I always long...someone once told me I will never be satisfied in life..I thought that a good thing, making me strive for more than just the ordinary... *s thank you M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Bernie, thank you. That is a kind and nice thing to say hugs M |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Not only haunted by dreams, but wanting to be the dreams that are haunting... |
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