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suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


25 posted 10-04-2002 03:59 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Hmmm... it's not the sun scorching that lake causing all the steam. *S* You mastered rhyme long ago... now you're getting VERY good at free verse. *S*

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Janet Marie
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26 posted 10-05-2002 11:05 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Forgive me for taking so long to come back to this and thank you two...I had some server troubles off and on for the last few days.....


Chris....why am I NOT surprised YOU noticed the lack of rhyme....SO...does that mean you will try rhyming  just to show me up ???
thank you poet sir for coming by and peeking at the tats. LOL
so glad you enjoyed. ..you can pun me anytime.  

Ruth-girlie.....thank you so much for your kind compliments...I am enjoying free verse...it doesnt work me mothy muse as hard ..LOL...I was hoping to try and capture the style that Ron does so very well with his "less is more" and imagery...
and of course those closing summation lines of impact that he always knocks me out with. I heard you were feeling under the weather...hope youre doing better now...
the werk monster will miss you


thanks to all for your replies and again to Ron for the inspire.

baerlon
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27 posted 10-24-2002 11:05 AM       View Profile for baerlon   Email baerlon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit baerlon's Home Page   View IP for baerlon

wish i had more time to type, in class right now.  so shhh.  but i liked this thx for sharing.   ahh teach coming got to go :-)

There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

Walter Poe
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28 posted 10-29-2002 12:36 PM       View Profile for Walter Poe   Email Walter Poe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Walter Poe

Hi JM been a long time gone and a long road travelled been everywhere seen a lot but every now and again i need a pit stop and where better than here i am using this poem to send the message great as it is its better for leeting me drop you a line. maybe i e-mail you now im back for a while  

The very deep did rot: O Christ!
That ever this should be!
Yea, slimy things did crawl with legs
Upon the slimy sea.

Janet Marie
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29 posted 10-29-2002 01:01 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Bae and Walter..thank you for taking the time and effort to find me on back pages...I dont post very often anymore due to a moody muse and time constraints here that take me away from the poetry.

Walter..any time you wish to write will be welcomed.

thank you both.

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


30 posted 11-11-2007 01:13 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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