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caterina
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0 posted 2002-10-02 03:15 PM



I didn't make a funny face
even though I wanted to
stick my fingers in my ear
poke out my tongue
to wiggle waggle back and forth
with a nah, nah, nah, nah, nah.

No, I'm told it's not polite
so I took a gentler approach
and tilted my head to one side,
the tippy-tip of my tongue peeking out
looked at him with an 'oh yeah' grin
a 'come and get me' taunt,

then ran

like the little girl that I sometimes am
and he took chase, caught my ankle
half-way up the stair, he didn't care
that I behaved

almost

I got a spanking anyway.

caterina

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1 posted 2002-10-02 03:21 PM


rofl!
This is great

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2 posted 2002-10-02 03:29 PM


Well if I can only read one poem this time around at pip I sure am glad I picked this one. This is, well, it's just a delight. For so many reasons. Enjoyed
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3 posted 2002-10-02 03:30 PM


caterina,
Cute, enjoyed the read.

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4 posted 2002-10-02 04:05 PM




(giggles in delight) Oh Caterina, I love the way you handled the situation, it is cute and harmless in my opinion too, yay, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Caterina, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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5 posted 2002-10-02 04:15 PM


(smiling) now this certainly seems an invitation to play....

very cute..and an enjoyable read

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2002-10-02 08:59 PM


caterina - damned if you do, damned if you don't, the wonder of it all...

BC

wranx
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7 posted 2002-10-02 09:16 PM


Well, damned if i don't......

think this to be outstanding.


~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".      

~wranx~

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8 posted 2002-10-02 10:09 PM


What a witty, charming, interesting, unique, and utterly delightful poem!

Absolutely loved it!

Earth Angel

caterina
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9 posted 2002-10-02 11:48 PM



Thankyou everyone, you are all wonderful and I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.

caterina


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