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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-10-02 04:30 AM

Your Kiss

in all the pleasures
of this world
that exist
the most
sensual thing
about you
is your kiss
it is
soft as
a single hair
the whispered
echo of
a silent prayer
the sound
surrounds in
tender ring
in notes
of wind
that leaves sing

I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you.

secretlife
Member

since 2002-07-30

Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,

1 posted 2002-10-02 07:22 AM

As always I love your poems..
Nice written...
So sensitive feelings..
Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

2 posted 2002-10-02 09:01 AM

A kiss can tell all.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2002-10-02 09:27 AM

Wonderful description of the pleasure of a kiss. ThisDiamond

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-10-02 09:30 AM

Ah Helen, this is lovely...
as gentle as a first kiss.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

msflame
Member

since 2002-05-21

Posts 188

5 posted 2002-10-02 09:43 AM

This is very nice, Helen, it could be a love song.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-10-02 11:40 AM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo sensually beautiful, sweet friend, I love it! (kiss on cheek) May loves kiss always bring a warm afterglow to your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

haydenjames
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 164
Antigua & Barbuda

7 posted 2002-10-02 01:33 PM

I love how you write about a love in this way... in my case i usually write of a love that dosn't exsist..

Great write!

My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2002-10-02 01:38 PM

Helen,
A gentle lovely, enjoyed.

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

9 posted 2002-10-02 03:49 PM

~sigh~
this is sooooo nicely put

your pen is like an artist's brush

thanks, Lady

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