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Open Poetry #22

Spilling

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-10-02 02:59 AM

Spilling

to feel a thought
then make it real
the glass of life
tipped to spill
drops in gather
course ahead
it’s liquid runs
to flow and spread
tumble, splatter
pour smooth move
release has altered
I do approve

I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you.

insect
Senior Member

since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

1 posted 2002-10-02 07:49 PM

I
  loved
             the
                     flow
                               of this! Great write!

The Crimson Knight
Member

since 2002-09-16

Posts 57
Reno, NV

2 posted 2002-10-02 09:56 PM

Too often I’m spilling
Not just a cold bottle of beer, but that too. With emotions, they just want to spill out when it’s just not the right time. This poem makes me think about that, I got to learn to keep the young lass from knocking over my glass.
Like this bunches

fishop
Member

since 2002-09-13

Posts 79
ohio

3 posted 2002-10-02 10:03 PM

This does flow like "drops in gather
course ahead". As usual, nice poem.

Tom

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-10-02 11:43 PM

(smiles) Awwwwww, you always spill your heart out so beautifully in poetry, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2002-10-03 02:39 PM

nice sounds combinations that add to the images... as usual I enjoyed

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2002-10-03 02:43 PM

1slick_lady
Well done, enjoyed.

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