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Beki
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0 posted 2002-10-02 01:49 AM



variations on a theme

between two palms
on invisible hammock -
half moon reclines


half moon reclines
between two beachside palms -
stars for bedfellows


against night's blanket
flung between palm silhouettes
half moon reclines


half moon reclines
on a blanket of stars -
palm trees stand guard.


09/15/02

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Pilgrimage
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1 posted 2002-10-02 10:12 AM


What a lovely series, both the language and the images.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

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2 posted 2002-10-02 11:22 AM




(smiles) Wow!!! Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, I love how you paint different words here but describe the same tropical setting, I love it, this is so novel, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rebecca, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Beki
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3 posted 2002-10-02 09:37 PM


Thanks so much for reading Noah and Pilgrim ---

noah, it is good to hear from you again - it has been a very long time my friend

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