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"Liar"
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"Liar" |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I would like to grab your head in grasp of hair submitting neck and plant upon your nose a knife without a mercy gasp of air of diversion of the eyes dodge-ball in the compromise of all the things you'd like to hear compared to things that you can't say... [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (10-02-2002 02:18 AM).] |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
i've had to backspace about thirteen sarcastic remarks, none of which would have been appropriate for the forums. consider this a job well done.  |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
get the attention You are Here |
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Rosalind Palafox
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MemberPosts 88 |
This is dark. Liars are frustrating after all, eh? I can see why you wrote this poem. Nice n to the point.  "Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
hmmm.. remind me to keep you away from sharp objects... vivid my friend... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, All streets are two ways, in and out.  Ps. nice write. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I know that the term "pay through the nose" comes from Poor houses, where, when you were in debt, they would slice the flesh between your nostrils with a knife as a permanent sign that you did not pay what was due. I felt this poem as that, only as a debt of the spirit, the soul... and of love. |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Liars have to have good memorys to remember how they deviated from the truth. paladin |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
um...hormones? Yeah, yeah... that's the ticket! It was HORMONES!!!   thanks as always |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Karen, I know just how you feel, if there is one thing I hate more than anything else in the world, it is to lie, and whenever I feel I accidentley did I like to rewind immediately and analyze the situation and correct it! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderfully said, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Remind me never to lie to YOU!! LOL I know just how you feel though. My X was a habitual liar who wouldn't know the truth if it hit him in the face. Want his address? I kinda like the thought of his big nose with a few notches in it...  ...sorry, couldn't help myself..Tammy |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
actually, noah, forgive my wicked grin...but a sharp steel point just beneath the nose tends to speed up the process of "rewind" a bit... Sigh...forgive this rant good poets. Consider it a "flash flood"?  |
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