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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-10-01 08:56 PM




Hidden Heart Places

You reach into your heart
taking me to those places
you had buried so deep
inside
that you had forgotten
they ever existed...
Together we walk
hand in hand
along the edges
of your dreams...
Your eyes show
the soul of a spirit
that could not remember
how to fly,
and all I could do
was take your hand
and through tears of love
whisper amidst the sounds
of silence....
I am here~


I could feel the flicker
of your flame
reaching,
reaching for the sky
that it might again
burn with the passion
for life that it once held...
as tears fell....
falling from eyes of blue
as you took me
to your hidden heart places,
and I...
I with all my love for you
could only whisper...

I am here~




If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-01-2002 09:03 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-10-01 09:23 PM



Now you KNOW I like whispering poems!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

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2 posted 2002-10-01 09:42 PM


Keep whispering and watch the healing continue. This is pretty, Donna. *hugs*
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3 posted 2002-10-01 10:11 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I could feel the whispers in these words, sweet friend, may love always find a way and reach out to those who desire the healing process, this is heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-10-01 10:16 PM


Absolutely beautiful Donna..
You write beautifully in a whisper.
~Hugs sweet poetess~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2002-10-02 06:33 AM


Thank you all so much for being so kind.  I appreciate the visits and kind words.  
Hope ya'll have a great day.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

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