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Enotneicna
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since 1999-06-06
Posts 340
Oakland, Or, USA

0 posted 2002-10-01 07:46 PM


this is an entry for judging at writersprompt.com
the prompt was....You have to kill your darlings"
I haven't been judged yet will let you know how it goes

Black Widow
.
well it’s done
that took awhile
spring...spring...test it a bit
I like it.....strong and sticky
now to sit and wait a bit
there I feel you
a little closer
I’ll get you
just a little more
gottcha little darling..
now to wrap you up to cure
take you over here to hang a bit
hmmmm...have a little repair work to do
there......spring...spring...good as new
.
hmmmm...you feel different...
ahhh....I know you...come lover
be careful.....watch your step
you’re a handsome little darling
yes you are
but careful now
come on......come on
careful little darling
you’ve doing very well so far
oh little lover......slowly
you don’t want to piss me off
almost done......careful
oh oh.....you did it
gotcha....poor little darling
.
Enotneicna
SLR
10-1-02

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!



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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2002-10-01 08:05 PM


Very cute. Good luck. ThisDiamond
Enotneicna
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since 1999-06-06
Posts 340
Oakland, Or, USA
2 posted 2002-10-01 10:40 PM


ThisDiamond..........thanks, i can use all the help I can get.

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!


[This message has been edited by Enotneicna (10-02-2002 01:17 AM).]

FuzzyFrazzledFraggle
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since 2002-09-20
Posts 155
Fraggle Rock
3 posted 2002-10-01 11:27 PM


*impish grin* Loved the way you weaved your story..intriquing style..and images

Consider yourself fuzzed

Enotneicna
Member
since 1999-06-06
Posts 340
Oakland, Or, USA
4 posted 2002-10-01 11:39 PM


FFF............Thanks soooo much.......glad you enjoyed.

many blessings
Always
Eno

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!



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