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SimplyGold
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0 posted 2002-10-01 06:24 PM


The Trial


You sat before us
  you proclaimed innocence
The lawyers all gave their stories
  Information pointing in opposite directions
Each said it was fact

We sat there watching
  eager, naive to legal manuvering
Caught inbetween deliberate ambiguity
  only wanting the truth
Boarding on Kafa
  The trial comes to life
right before our eyes
  We acknowledge this is the best system
except for capricious accusations
  for which we have no penalty

I see now, it can work both ways
  Leave out a word
Don't ask the right question
  This burden is great
I listen closely
  our system depends on it

And so you looked at us
  Each counslor made the case
Each said it was the truth
  Both wanted justice
Our arms were heavy as we
  weighed in the evidence

Twelve minds seeking probity
  Hoping the "thief in the night" would be tranparent
But, it is not that simple
  Relying on the evidence and
in the end trusting common sense
  We pray for sound judgement

c2002SimplyGold
  
  
  


[This message has been edited by SimplyGold (10-01-2002 09:18 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-10-01 06:29 PM


I wouldn't make a very good juror, it must have been tough....this is very thought provoking
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2 posted 2002-10-01 10:43 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) This is so very true and saddening, sweet friend, it seems the truth is always being hidden selfishly and in result so many innocent people are harmed and even killed each year by the wrongful accusations by capital punishment which the system is so inept! (sad sigh) My heart goes out to all the innocent hurt by the guillotined truth, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



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Bill Charles
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3 posted 2002-10-01 10:45 PM


SimplyGold - I've sat in on some trials, and you have told it exactly like it is...

BC

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4 posted 2002-10-02 08:59 AM


Reasonable doubt, reasonable doubt.
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5 posted 2002-10-02 02:08 PM


I have known several people who have been jurors and it can really wreak havoc with both your personal and professional lives.
Because of the profession of my husband, now "was"band, I was relieved to know that I would never be called to perform this civic duty.

You did a wonderful job at recreating what it was like for you as a juror.

Have a great day!

EA

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6 posted 2002-10-02 04:21 PM


I've only had to serve on a jury once and can relate to this very well.  When all is said and done the evidence has to be weighed.  Well done!  
SimplyGold
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7 posted 2002-10-02 04:59 PM


Thank you all for your comments. Our civic duty is very thought provoking. I'm interested in others experiences. Poetry challenge. Go Go

SG

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8 posted 2002-10-09 06:46 PM


An excellent write, Electra...
I know that everyone always complains about jury duty... but I have never had the pleasure...
The only time I was summoned for it, the parties settled out of court and we were released before there was a trial...
I honestly wouldn't mind sitting on a jury...
I think it would be fascinating.
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SimplyGold
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9 posted 2002-10-11 01:20 PM


Hi Madame C.

I think you would be a great juror.

SG

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