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Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
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Netherlands

0 posted 2002-10-01 05:38 PM



I was just a Dutchie lass
Who wrote feelings in a book
Then one day decide upon
Giving them a different look

I was walking down webpages
When I found those pages blue
Didn't know what hit me then
But apparently it was you

Took me by surprise you know
Thought I had come to heaven
Reading all that poetry
The clock went passed eleven

I went passed 3.00 AM too
Felt no notion of the time
Realized that I had drownd
In a fountain full of rhyme

So I tried to speak your tongue
Grammar wasn't always tight
But I had this hope you see
That you'd understand me right

And so you did from first day on
Took me in as a lost child
Encouraged me to write my poems
In your critiques you were mild

We have become a family
Close and caring I might say
Thanks to Ron who started this
We should hug him all one day

Shared the death of relatives
Prayed to God, most of you do
Giving strength when one's in need
But we have our good laughs too

That week when I was travelling
And needed to be on my own
There wasn't a single moment
That I felt really alone

Where ever I was going
I knew that someone was there
Whom I could call when needed
A friend that really would care

Please listen to this Dutchie
Because I want to tell you
Whenever you need a hug
Just grab me, I need yours too

New Port Richie, Sept. 27 2002


In the little giftbag I put a poem for all the poets present, but I myself don't have them anymore. So please if you still have this little poem, will you put it below if you reply or email it to me?


Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (10-02-2002 05:11 AM).]

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Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
1 posted 2002-10-01 06:24 PM


Titia,
I liked this one the first time I heard it, and it's even better now. I'll get mine and email it to you, probably tomorrow. Of course I still have it!

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

SimplyGold
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since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453

2 posted 2002-10-01 06:32 PM


Kool, nice write

SG

Nan
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3 posted 2002-10-01 06:36 PM


.... Here's a Cape Cod Hug for ya ....
It was wonderful having you here, Titia

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

4 posted 2002-10-01 07:42 PM


I am so glad that you enjoyed your trip Titia.  I enjoyed this very much.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Marsha
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Maidstone Kent England
5 posted 2002-10-01 08:51 PM


SweetTitia~
I loved this poetic *gift* ... I also have mine ...(of course we all would always keep it) ... so if you wish we'll all send to you~Tee-Hee !

My son just left ... he got my computer fixed !

LOVE YOU~
Please tell Muys I will write to thank her for Delaney's lovely, lovely gift tomorrow~
*Knuffels*
~*Marge*~
And Bill sends his too !
I miss you more than you know~
~*Marge*~


nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2002-10-01 08:52 PM


A quick reply to let you know how much fun it was getting to be with you and all the pip friends...I absolutely loved your treat even if we didn't have the correct ingredients..it is now a favorite of mine and I can't wait to try it on my own...it was delicious ...thank you Titia, for your friendship

hugsssss to you AND your Mother

Maureen

Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2002-10-01 10:59 PM




(BIG HUGGGSSSSSSSS) Oh Titia, you are such a special friend to all of us and know I am always here to give you a big hug even when I wasn't at the poet meet! (kiss on cheek) I'm delighted you had so much fun, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-02-2002 02:49 PM).]

FuzzyFrazzledFraggle
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Fraggle Rock
8 posted 2002-10-01 11:14 PM


Awww Lovely Stuff Titia!!! I'm feeling Fuzzy

Consider yourself fuzzed

Balladeer
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9 posted 2002-10-01 11:20 PM


No, you're never alone now, Dutchie. You have made friends for life..

You can be sure I have mine! (I'll find it when I unpack!)

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
10 posted 2002-10-01 11:26 PM


Titia - You don't know how happy I am to have stopped to read this write of yours...

Please listen to this Dutchie
Because I want to tell you
Whenever you need a hug
Just grab me, I need yours too

'I'll listen to a Dutchie
hear all the words you say
for I've been there also
needing someone, in a big way...'

Best to you my friend,

BC

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
11 posted 2002-10-02 07:32 AM


And we’re so glad this Dutchie lass found this place. Always a treat to read you Titia. Though I miss your wonderful pictures of scenes from your world. Can we have some more soon?

You can never win or lose
If you don't
Run the race

Psychedelic Furs - Love My Way

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise
12 posted 2002-10-02 10:17 AM


Titia, my new friend from Holland. It was such fun meeting you and getting to know you and your homeland.

I hope you will come back to America again soon and visit with us. Good luck with your sheep and give those doggies of yours a pat from me.

Hugs and stay in touch, Marti

suthern
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Louisiana
13 posted 2002-10-02 01:07 PM


I'd always been filled with gratitude
That you found these pages of blue
And I anxiously awaited the day
When I'd be meeting you.
But, alas, the fates weren't kind
And this suthern gal had to stay home
But I'm glad you had a lovely time
Throughout your American roam.

This is beautiful, Titia... *S*

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
14 posted 2002-10-02 01:25 PM


Titia,
Wonderful write and you are a wonderful friend. We are painting and the house is a mess, but I'll look for it as soon as I can.

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
15 posted 2002-10-02 05:55 PM


I wrote you a three stanza thank you poem and then I clicked on the wrong X and off it went and now I don't remember the words anymore.

Anyway, lots of hugs to you all and Balladeer, you're right. After meeting you all in Florida, I know I won't be alone evermore.

Thanks to all,

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (10-03-2002 12:14 PM).]

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