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Radrook
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since 2002-08-09
Posts 648


0 posted 2002-10-01 01:17 PM




Make me that hamburger

willya?

Put it right there on the grill.
Well-done with pickles.

I only got 1/2 hour fer lunch,

OK?

Hey!

I said

make me a hamburger willya!

Put it right there on the grill!
Lettuce and tomatoes
no onions.
Well done
Tago


OK?

I only got 1/2 hour fer lunch,
Like I just told ya


Ya know?


So


just make me that hamburger willya.
Just slap it right there on that grille


Ya hear?

Well done!

OK?

You deaf?

WELL DONE!

DAMN YOU!

WELL DONE!



[This message has been edited by Radrook (10-01-2002 01:21 PM).]

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Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
1 posted 2002-10-01 03:01 PM


*Laughing*

WELL DONE it is!
~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

bsquirrel
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
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2 posted 2002-10-01 03:11 PM


This made me both hungry,
and wanting to throw your cellphone on the grill.

You're one of THOSE customers, ain'tcha?

lol, enjoyed

Guy in Line

Radrook
Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648

3 posted 2002-10-02 02:59 PM


Thanks for feedback!

Actually, I think it is rather inhumane to give a worker just 1/2 hour to gulp down his lunch. The poor fella is stupid enough not to bring his own lunch and takes the better part of his 30 minutes just getting to the restaurant and getting back to work. Add to that all the other bozos gathered at the place all with the same 1/2 hour and I am surprised that a riot never broke out or that the waitress didn't crown one of the customers with a chromium steel frying pan.
I of course never acted that boorishly. But considering the situation, it is well within the realm of the possible for this to happen and I am almost certain it has.

Glad you enjoyed.

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