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Aimster
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0 posted 2002-09-30 08:33 PM



Full Circle

we've come full circle in this...and im so happy to still say you are mine
ours is a love that is destined, to withstand all things...even time
when i think of all we've shared i can't help but smile for a moment or two
when i think of the most precious gift life has given me...you

you are the reason i laugh and the reason that i cry
with you by my side...i feel my heart and soul has wings to fly
something deeper has been found, though i think it was between you and i all along
we just had to search a little longer...now we've finally got a home where we belong

you mean more to me than words could ever say
i will show you though each and every single day
i never knew love until i looked into your beautiful eyes
now never again will you and i have to say good-bye

hold my hand, hold my heart...cherish me as i certainly cherish you
together we will make it through it all, and chase away past pains of blue
i feel our souls belong together, no more do i question why or how
i just know that everything we've been through has led to this love we share now

you and i met long ago, our souls have been searching for one another ever since that day
so tonight as i am thinking of you again i just want to say
i love you jena now and forever more, nothing is going to change the love we share
together forever, we are...by your side or in your arms, i will always be there

"if irish eyes are smiling...they are probably up to something" :)

© Copyright 2002 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Streen
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1 posted 2002-09-30 09:19 PM


Congratulations on everything in your relationship! While love poems can be a dime a dozen, when I was reading this one, the happiness that it conveyed really made me smile.
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2 posted 2002-10-01 12:04 PM




(sigh) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I wish you and Jena the greatest happiness forever and ever! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, I am so happy for you both, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Hearts_Dance
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3 posted 2002-10-01 12:47 PM


I finally found a happy poem with a happy ending. I like this poem, not only because it is happy, but it was heartfelt and flowed very nicely.
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4 posted 2002-10-01 02:21 AM


Happiness is to be shared as I do with yours Amy girl.  Hugs for always shouting it from the roof top.  

Your poetry brings the brightest smile.  

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5 posted 2002-10-01 01:17 PM


The circles of love and time are not always on the wall.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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6 posted 2002-10-01 03:36 PM


Amy darling lil sister of my heart, wonderful writing sweetie I'll phone soon I promise. We have been so busy that we simply haven't stopped. But you know I think of you every day. Take care darling heart and I'll speak to you soon and you can give me all the news.
Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Aimster
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7 posted 2002-10-01 03:41 PM


thank you all for your wonderful replies.
it has been a rough couple of months for
my girlfriend and I...but after a brief
seperation from one another, we realise we
love each other and need each other too
much to let go and also something else...
that any and all obstacles in our way,
are worth going through in order to be
together. sometimes you really don't know
what you have until it is gone...i know
that is cliche, but it is so true! thank you
all for your love and support.

amy

p.s. sis don't worry i know you are busy!
i hope you guys are all having a great time.
i saw deer's pics...they were gr8! love you!
tell krissy i say hi please.

"if irish eyes are smiling...they are probably up to something" :)

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8 posted 2002-10-01 03:54 PM


I really like this. I like the way you put your feelings in your words. A lot of the things you said remind me of the things my Gary and I have been through. We have had many obstacles to overcome in our relationship, but our "Forever  Love" is seeing us through all of them.
Thank you.

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with you
9 posted 2002-10-01 04:28 PM


Amy,
always, you write your heart so beautifully with such a tenderness, and openness. So good to read you again!

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