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Thomas119gold
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since 2002-06-03
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Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

0 posted 2002-09-30 02:26 PM




The petal was so soft to the touch
I have never experienced so much

It was a light feeling running
across my face while your eyes
held me in a tight embrace

A promise not to touch just feathers, roses,
and silky fingers were allowed to prowl on our bodies as we watched

Who can tease the most and please the best
without skin touching that was the test

Looks like I failed what is next?



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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-09-30 03:36 PM


Nice. My guess is, what is next might be for a different forum? hmmm...will you let us know when that followup teasing is posted?
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2002-10-01 04:02 AM


I sure I would fail also...but I would give it a good try...James
Thomas119gold
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Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)
3 posted 2002-10-01 07:50 AM


Yet we are willing to try and try and try

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