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Leather by the Door
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Leather by the Door |
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The Crimson Knight Member
since 2002-09-16
Posts 57Reno, NV |
On the chair by the door ~drapes my black leather jacket ~ ~it’s my old traveling comfort, by the bed on the floor ~piles her white silk and lace, ~ ~the dim of candles lights the place. On the handmade cotton quilt ~gently touch we learn by feel ~ ~the emotional that is so real, In satin sleep without guilt ~I wake to whisper of the wind ~ ~and desire rises to take a spin. To feel the rushing air of speed ~on open spaces the feel of free, ~ ~it ever calls softly to me. The longing is almost a need, ~to fill my body with the vibrations ~ ~I stay half awake with mixed emotions. I leave warmth behind in the bed ~and touch the cool of leather there ~ ~patiently waiting the night air. From soft pillow she raises her head, ~and calls me sweetly back to lace ~ ~and I know I can’t resist her smiling face |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
choices, choices...  I enjoyed this  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo lovely, sweet friend, true love always shines through your heartfelt words, this is spellbinding, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dirk, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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The Crimson Knight Member
since 2002-09-16
Posts 57Reno, NV |
Thanx Sea and Noah for the kind words. Although some choices are tuff, some are easy, like this poem the words came tuff but the postin was easy |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
a little leather...a little lace... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I enjoyed this touch of leather and lace. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Crimson Knight, I loved your poem. Of course, I would, being the romantic that I am. I'm really glad of the choice you made at the end!!!!! Thanks. Love to all, Ethel...garysgirl |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
I think the right choice was made. Enjoyed the poem! Thanks for sharing! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I think you put the words together beautifully; I like this a lot. Pat without surrender, be on good terms with all persons... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A delicious capsule of freedom, love and lace. ThisDiamond |
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The Crimson Knight Member
since 2002-09-16
Posts 57Reno, NV |
Dang, I had forgot all about this, and I want to thank you all for reading and responding to it. Been out of touch for a bit, but don’t let my slow response to you guys and dolls take from the warmth of my thanks |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dang! Leather or lace??? What a decision to have to make... But I do believe you made the right one. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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