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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-09-29 09:29 PM



I will paint
with mind brush stroke,
a landscape dripping
earth toned thoughts.

A view of touch,
in Autumn lush.

Feel the cushioned step.
Leaf littered dirt,
Musky flirt.
Then sense in air
moistened renew of life.

Vision,
a world in pause,
written,
a text
of Fall.

WhiteRose

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SEA
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1 posted 2002-09-29 09:35 PM


Autumn is my most favorite time of year, I like this very much
The Crimson Knight
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2 posted 2002-09-29 09:39 PM


I like this, has a good feel to it, like being in a big forest and watching the leaves change on just one tree, or something like that, what ever I liked it

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2002-09-29 09:49 PM


WhiteRose - I do like autumn. I wonder what it will be like here in Tucson?

BC

WhiteRose
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4 posted 2002-09-29 09:56 PM


Sea, Thank you for your response. I love the colors of Autumn. Deep, and rich in the colors of earth.

CrimsonKnight, so glad you enjoyed.

Bill, I lived in Phoenix for 10 years. The Autumn is barely distinguishable from the rest of the year. The one thing I missed the most while living in AZ, was the change of season. But, there are many special wonders the desert holds that you will not see anywhere else. A deep purple sunset is one. Air that is so hot you can feel it as a tangible thing that shares your space making you almost claustrophobic though in open surroundings. And the critters. hmmmmm...you are in for a treat. I tease. The desert will reveal it's own mysteries to you, and I can't wait to read some of them revealed in your poetry.

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (09-29-2002 09:57 PM).]

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