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Open Poetry #22

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Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2002-09-29 07:31 PM

Is this a hand to you, empty remained.
The tears flow freely for you, sustained
Slowly pounding a heart, not mended
Hope in a soul, dying, silently, disturbed

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-09-29 08:13 PM

DJD~ this reads so painfully sad....I hope all is well with you

Miss T. Eyed
Junior Member

since 2002-05-26

Posts 47

2 posted 2002-09-30 10:26 AM

Such a very intense, and sad poem, but at times we need to express the feeling inside, so we can free ourselves of the pain. You did a great job expressing within this poem. Thanks for sharing it here

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