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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-09-29 06:27 PM


Love you?

Why would one ever perceive not?
Might it be the silence of lips.
The lack of one’s touch.
The look of eyes without that gleam.

Could it be these?

Could it just be...sometimes...
I struggle to say the words...
I fail to grasp the hand...

Never because I don’t
For...even on my worst day...
Our worst day...I will...
I will always love you....

And, I wish to be here...
Here, my love....beside you,  
as each day passes, each night comes..
As each moon sets beyond the hills..
My love will not set, nor wane...
Even on those days when I
don’t have that gleam....

When I fail to reach out and
touch you, as you have touched me...
over all of these years...
Loving me, as I too,  
love you...



© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-29 06:55 PM


Barry

She is lucky to be so loved!  

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2 posted 2002-09-29 07:02 PM




(sigh) Oh Barry, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, she is so lucky to have a wonderful faithful love like you, this is an ultimate declaration of love, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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3 posted 2002-09-29 08:31 PM


You are both so very fortunate to have found a love so strong.
I know you had to work at it as my love and I do as well.
Very nicely penned Barry.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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4 posted 2002-09-29 08:32 PM


this should be a song It's wonderful!!
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5 posted 2002-09-29 09:11 PM


Magnus,

You write so beautifully. I'm touched when I read your thoughts. Your expression of love assures me that the heart is alive and well.

SimplyGold

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6 posted 2002-09-29 09:34 PM


sweet simply pure gold and then some *sigh*

Consider yourself fuzzed

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7 posted 2002-09-29 09:53 PM


Yet another wonderful read Magnus! Chris

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8 posted 2002-09-29 10:00 PM


Barry - a very touching dedication to someone close and loved. Best to you...

BC

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9 posted 2002-09-29 10:18 PM


Very best to you both always. ThisDiamond
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10 posted 2002-09-29 11:01 PM


excellence in your love expressed...tis truly Magnus!
hugs, Cher

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Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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