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SEA
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0 posted 2002-09-29 01:22 PM



At times most unexpected
I find memories of you
Little bits and pieces
Things, I forgot I knew

Just out of nowhere
But somehow as if on cue
My heart hears your laughter
And I remember you

How these thoughts find their way
I haven’t got a single clue
But always, when I need a friend
My heart remembers you

It’s in these special moments
That will last a lifetime through
I smile to myself, and softly say
…….I remember you…….


~SEA~

[This message has been edited by SEA (10-01-2002 04:19 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-09-29 01:34 PM


And we always remember you SEA girlie!
Oh how you and your lovely poetry have been missed.
Welcome home..hope the move went smoothly.
Loved the write.
~Hugs, Nancy~


~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~


[This message has been edited by Enchantress (09-29-2002 04:03 PM).]

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2 posted 2002-09-29 01:38 PM


thank you Nancy
yep, the move was great!

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3 posted 2002-09-29 01:48 PM


Yep, this is what I missed from you.  Nice, soft feel to this memory, Susan.
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4 posted 2002-09-29 02:27 PM


What a wonderful tribute, Susan, very heartfelt.  So glad to have you back home.     (((hugs)))
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5 posted 2002-09-29 02:41 PM


"How these thoughts find their way
I haven’t got a single clue
But always, when I need a friend
My heart remembers you"




(smiles) Yay!!! Awwwwwwww, and we have all missed you so so much, for we have never forgotten you and when we miss you we always cherish your gorgeous words and think of your golden heart and the smiles you share! (kiss on cheek) Ooohhh...I'm so glad you're back, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-09-29 02:51 PM


SEA, I sure have missed reading your poetry. This is beautiful!
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7 posted 2002-09-29 03:40 PM


Nice to read you again. Welcome back.
ThisDiamond

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8 posted 2002-09-29 03:52 PM


What a cute words from a great poet...
I love it ...

Hugesss

Secretlife,
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9 posted 2002-09-29 03:55 PM


thanks all

Michael...
and Cowboy.....

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10 posted 2002-09-29 04:11 PM


And we remember U 2.....
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11 posted 2002-09-29 05:51 PM


SEA - it's difficult to not remember, as you have written so well...

BC

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12 posted 2002-09-29 06:44 PM



How glad we are that you're finally, really, absolutely home!  I don't think we're going to be letting you traipse about the countryside for some time to come, little one...

you get lost!

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13 posted 2002-09-29 07:05 PM


lol @ Sunshine I am so glad to be back
(((hugs)))

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14 posted 2002-09-30 08:57 AM


I love the pattern of ryhmes you write here. Everything rolls off the tongue very nicely.
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15 posted 2002-09-30 09:13 AM


ah we all remember you and your tender words of love... have missed them and you my friend...
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16 posted 2002-09-30 01:08 PM


Welcome back, Susan!
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17 posted 2002-10-01 03:48 AM


Sue's back in town...nice to have someone to remember...with affection...James
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18 posted 2002-10-01 10:38 AM


This truly is sweet SEA, kind of musters up some memories of my own and makes me miss some dear people too.  {{{{{HUGZ}}}}}

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



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19 posted 2002-10-01 10:44 AM


SEA
A lovely write, enjoyed the read. Nice to see you back.

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20 posted 2002-10-01 11:32 AM


Sea memories are such treasures
and you lovingly write of such pleasures
Hope

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21 posted 2002-10-01 04:08 PM


aside from getting Skid Row stuck in my head , this was sweet... even though it rhymes. it's those memories that can help keep us going at times, isn't it?

a minor edit on "no where" to change it to "nowhere" would help this flow a little bit better susanofer.


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22 posted 2002-10-01 04:20 PM


thank you all very much, and Kissy Face, that song gets stuck in my head when I hear I remember you too lol and I edited it, thanks for the advice
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23 posted 2002-10-01 05:13 PM


enjoyed this
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24 posted 2002-10-01 06:55 PM


SEA  - Oh, how I have missed your relaxing reads such as this!! Lovely. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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25 posted 2002-10-01 07:08 PM


Skid Row?
No way! Whenever
I see
that string of words
I think
RAMONES!!!

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26 posted 2002-10-01 07:13 PM


We all remember you, and your lovely poetry!

Deb

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27 posted 2002-10-01 07:20 PM


Hi there.  I dont remember you, but then we never met. Nice poem, nice to meet you.
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28 posted 2002-10-01 09:50 PM


I like the Ramones, but I only know one of their songs off the top of my head.....
that Rock and Roll High School one lol


and Fishop, nice to meet you now I will see if I can find one of yours

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