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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-09-29 12:27 PM

If I Could Write My Heart

If I could write my heart
like the beauty of a
Rembrandt or perhaps
of a symphony of
the finest masters
I would write a
pallet of colors
and an orchestra
of sounds for the
world to see and hear.
If I could write my heart
it might be of the breathtaking
beauty of a tide breaking
along the shorelines
under a moonlight sky
or perhaps it would be
of a sunset against
a backdrop of mountains
rising as two lovers
take in the stars
from below together
for the first time
If I could write my heart
per chance it would be
of gentle breezes
touching the face
of a loved one
so far away
as they listen to
the sounds of a
heart beating in the
distance.
If I could write my heart
of love that touches
my spirit and weaves
it's warmth into my soul.......
I would write~ of you.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (09-29-2002 12:29 PM).]

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2002-09-29 12:34 PM

Gentle Spirit - You have written your heart, here in this write, very tender...

BC

SEA

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with you

2 posted 2002-09-29 12:37 PM

this is just beautiful....and I love the ending

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2002-09-29 12:38 PM

Thank you Bill. When I originally wrote this that was my intention. As always kind sir, thank you for stopping by.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2002-09-29 12:38 PM

Sea, you snuck in there on me. It is sooo good to see your smiling face among us again. Thanks hon.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

5 posted 2002-09-29 12:47 PM

"If I could write..."

---You just did! Wow--did you ever! I am so impressed with your writing---this was a stellar example of your talent as well as your loving and gentle spirit.

Linda

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2002-09-29 02:08 PM

Linda, *little curtsie* thank you much for the sweet comment.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Auguste

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By the sea

7 posted 2002-09-29 02:30 PM

You write your heart regularly, but especially in this lovely piece.

Mistletoe Angel

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8 posted 2002-09-29 02:34 PM

(smiles) And you always write out your golden heart with such love and grace for everyone just as well as any symphony conductor, yay!!! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Paul Wilson

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9 posted 2002-09-29 09:52 PM

Gentle Spirit~Your words have such grace in this piece. Sounds like it could be made into a beautiful love song sung by your favorite artist...Paul

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

10 posted 2002-09-29 10:13 PM

"If I could write my heart
of love that touches
my spirit and weaves
it's warmth into my soul.......
I would write~ of you."
--------------------------------------
Oh so beautiful Donna!
Very much enjoyed!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

ThUnDeRkYsS
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Wisconsin

11 posted 2002-09-30 01:55 PM

Well, if you could write your heart any better than you already have it would have to be a picture of it made with words... this is very good imagery.

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

Gentle Spirit
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12 posted 2002-09-30 08:38 PM

I wanted to take a minute and pop in to say thank you to everyone for leaving your thoughts. Its been a hectic schedule lately to say the least. Thanks Ya'll!

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

JamesMichael
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13 posted 2002-10-01 04:00 AM

Perfect...James

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

14 posted 2002-10-01 06:06 AM

I do believe this woke me up...
good morning, and good write...!

garysgirl

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15 posted 2002-10-01 04:49 PM

You have achieved your dream, because you really touched my heart......as well as many more, I'm sure.

vandana

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16 posted 2002-10-01 05:10 PM

enjoyed this

SimplyGold
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17 posted 2002-10-01 09:44 PM

Gentle Spirit,

"if you could write"?

"if I could read a great poem" I'd read "If I could Write My Heart" by Gentle Spirit

SimplyGold

Gentle Spirit
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18 posted 2002-10-02 06:07 AM

You have all blessed me with a smile this morning. Thank you all so very much!!

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

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