a sandstorm in reveal.... - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2002-09-29 03:48 AM

I am building a temple for you
in my mind
each brick another piece of you
priceless imperfection
marbelized to sheen
all of your faults
a river
of intricate patterns
I can trace
with one finger licked
finding myself
in spiderweb lines
amazed
that there is one out there
so close to the design of me...

But this?
is YOU
and cannot be
my manipulation
no--
no shovel must unearth the stone
I dare not risk
the damage
of my persistant
pound of curiosities.

So I will be good
and sit aside
watching the wonder of you arise--
a city lost
and now found
by a sandstorm in reveal.

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

1 posted 2002-09-29 04:05 AM

you sandblast
my brain
which is a good thing
cobwebs
old bad memories
poor paint jobs I had done
mmmmmmmhhhhmmmmmm
this sandstorm
is
NEEDED

love you
b

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

2 posted 2002-09-29 05:24 AM

Karen~~ Another really wonderful poem, enjoyed very much...Paul

To un-mask the heart and soul
To share life's dreams un-told
Should you be so bold?

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2002-09-29 05:27 AM

Paul?

I do not know another way
to say things I need to say--
so I toss the mask away
and pray that underneath is gold.

(thanks...)

Masked Intruder

Moderator

Senior Member

since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

4 posted 2002-09-29 06:12 AM

The sun is coming up sometime soon. Too bad my window doesn't look that way. Maybe I'll just move into another room.

You can't wake a person who is pretending to be asleep. -- Navajo Proverb

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

5 posted 2002-09-29 12:47 PM

But this?
is YOU
and cannot be
my manipulation
no--
no shovel must unearth the stone
I dare not risk
the damage
of my persistant
pound of curiosities.

So I will be good
and sit aside
watching the wonder of you arise--
a city lost
and now found
by a sandstorm in reveal.
----------------------------------
A temple of words, beautiful words, K. I like this one alot, more than words will let me express.

Don't drag the orchestra into this thing
Rattle those sticks, rattle those sticks
The sound is beautiful, its perfect!
The birthday party

[This message has been edited by brian madden (09-29-2002 12:49 PM).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2002-09-29 01:08 PM

I wish I wrote this one....truly fantastic

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

7 posted 2002-09-30 02:07 PM

Serenity,
I notice your writing with shovel
more and more --
digging digging digging.

Stones and cities.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-09-30 02:27 PM

"So I will be good
and sit aside
watching the wonder of you arise--
a city lost
and now found
by a sandstorm in reveal."

(sigh) Oh Karen, this is so wonderfully written, sweet friend, sometimes it helps to just take someone as one is and fail and try to analyze someone brick by brick as the spiderwebs are all part of being! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.