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CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-09-28 11:05 PM

Rainbows of Love

Soft white wispy mist floating in the treetops
Lit by the dawning of a pink morning sun tingeing still
dark gray clouds.
Warm bluish misty air, drifting over verdant mountains
Like your whisper on my cheek.

The deep blue of a clear, crisp sky
Snow white puffy clouds
Parading in random file on a slow breeze
Throwing cool shadows on newly cut bright green grass.
Like the peace you give me.

Flickering yellows
Itinerant white/yellow/red sparks
Off rough logs over curling blue flames
And glowing, golden embers warming the room.
Like the comfort of you.

Pulsating deep reds shot with
Exploding purples/blues/greens
Ejecting day-glow pinks and light yellows
Like our passion.

Flat, slate gray clouds low to the horizon
With a fine, cold drizzle driven onto barren ground
On a raw, relentless, black wind.
Like your absence

A rainbow fronting roiling storm clouds
Brilliant, highlighted with no end.
Myriads of colors
Blending
Like our love.

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-09-28 11:32 PM

completely beautiful

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

2 posted 2002-09-28 11:49 PM

Thank you dear SEA
smiles, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2002-09-29 01:03 AM

CSKpoet - I do like the way you describe the scene, and then add the last touching sentence to each verse. Very nice...

BC

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

4 posted 2002-09-29 05:37 AM

Thank you, Bill
kudos, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-09-29 07:19 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, and may rainbows always bleed in your hearts with the doves song of rue love, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

6 posted 2002-09-29 08:02 PM

CSKpoet, I love the imagery. Enjoyed very much.

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