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Hey Babaloui!
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Hey Babaloui! |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Preferably to be read with the accompaniment of a steady bongo musical backround. Ever see someone pickin on somebody this way?] Hey Babaloui! Wheeeere ya goin? Hey! Hey! Babaloui! Yo but is showin! With yo Rhino belly and yo elephant hips and yo rabbit incisors and yo camel lips! Wow Babaloui You is sweatin fat! Man Babaloui Don't sweat like that! People gonna think you a hippo in heat Yo blubber's a ripplin cause ya gots too much beat! Hey Babaloui! Yo neck too short! Yo Babaloui! That why you snort? Ya ain't no credit to the human race! Go tell yo mama getcha nother face! Wo! Babaloui! Watcha got in yo haaand? No! Babaloui! Don't a hiiiit me maaan! I didn't mean all the things I said! A please Babaloui? A please Babaloui! I seda a please Babaloui! I don't wowna be dead! [This message has been edited by Radrook (09-28-2002 11:04 PM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
playful write you've got goinn on..maaan  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Reminiscent of Bo Diddly. Yo! |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Thanks for the cool feedback bros! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Open and humorous...a lift for my heart and my lips. Glad I found this one. ThisDiamond |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
I actually saw a skinny fellow one time running from another who was out to give him a beating for some reason. He kept saying, "Don't hit me!" This happened about thirty years ago but maybe that's what triggered the poem. Glad you enjoyed! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 So the other side of the boxer's tale, hm?Wow, Radrook. I'm really enjoying your words. Glad I stumbled into them (and tripped on my face) |
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