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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-09-28 09:43 AM


Ups and Downs
~By Sue~

When I wake up every morning
I hope there will be no more pain
Like there was the day you left me
Leaving me here in vain

You had turned my world upside down
The day you just up and walked out on me
Leaving me with so much confusion
Just because with you I would disagree

I did not think I should agree
With all that you wanted me to do
Each time you made demands on me
It seemed this was unfair of you

I never knew what to expect of you
One minute you were loving me
Making things seem alright with us
The next you were leaving you see

It seems as though my life with you
Was always full of ups and downs
Sometimes I was afraid
To even make a sound

9-27-02




© Copyright 2002 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-28 08:18 PM




(big hugggsssss) Oh Sue, this is wonderfully touching, sweet friend, I am sorry your last experience didn't work out well but I know soon you will find the one whose goods will outweigh the bads by so much and show you true loves meaning and have the heart to admit when he is wrong! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-09-28 10:02 PM


Sue, maybe it was for the best then? You deserve much better (((hugs)))
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