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Masked Intruder
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Near golden sunsets

0 posted 2002-09-28 04:05 AM



Dreaming on curving roads,
unlighted, unpaved
so uncaring
Waiting for that
straight away
Itching to let loose
in one ten
mile
scream

You can't wake a person who is pretending to be asleep. -- Navajo Proverb

© Copyright 2002 Philip Zemler - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-28 10:49 AM


you DO know just how to say thing, M'dear Masked One. Good to see you here. Love ya. Misting ya.

"two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light
a duet done with passion"

excerpt from "I Love You"

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2 posted 2002-09-28 11:33 AM


I like the way your dream pathway opened up, giving this poem room to run.
Hope to see more of your work again soon!

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3 posted 2002-09-28 04:03 PM


Me too. With sighs. Me too.
Ryan
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4 posted 2002-09-29 05:32 AM


I was gonna say no one likes you, but...nope, still gonna say no one likes you

Ryan
(wanna go running?)

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5 posted 2002-09-29 05:33 AM


*wants to go running too*

Um, if Phil, promises to wear the bells...


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6 posted 2002-09-29 06:09 AM


Running would be nice.  Too bad it's five in the morning and doing things like running takes fifty times more effort.
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