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EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2002-09-28 02:33 AM

..old ghosts play in the darkened fields,
among the steetlights,
silhouetted moonlight upon fallen rain,
in silent, fleeting etchings of undying immortal romance
angels drift upon the wind,
whispering truth of lost revelation,
the trees rapture in twilight song.
in the sea of How It Happened,
theres a hallway
gliding in all manner of conceivable entirety
nestled in a quiet peaceful location,
... pulsing sandgrain embers of love in the endless wild sky...
dust in the empty space between unseen
drifting among larger immediate action
yet the ghosts still hang in the fog,
old gray coats draped between the trees.
aimless.
we search for the lost revelation,
from person to person,
from age to age,
as long as memories last,
we will not forget the sacrifices we have made.
an angel peeks her face...
truth to truth
there is no single truth
as the truth of her beauty.
the promise in her face

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2002-09-28 02:40 AM

ES,
Some interesting thoughts you provoke here. Nicely done.

(I think you want to correct this typo: among the steetlights,)

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

GOlDsparklESS
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 428
central nj

2 posted 2002-09-28 10:45 AM

yes, this is definitely under-rated superiority. i'm not going to pull it apart, but like, it flows very well , (ambience, and use of language to convey meaning). top quality! and you say i'm better than YOU. whatever!

GOlDsparklESS
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 428
central nj

3 posted 2002-09-28 10:48 AM

and.. this is really emotional. and beautiful. and that's something far beyond language. so there.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2002-09-29 10:59 AM

Very tender...lovely emotion ES...enjoyed reading you....

Lauren~

I need some distraction
...oh beautiful release
Memories seep from my veins

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2002-09-29 11:01 AM

EagleScorpion - yes, I find truth in beauty. Excellent write...

BC

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2002-09-29 03:19 PM

Another excellent write. Especially liked the gray coates between the trees...really nice presentation. ThisDiamond

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

7 posted 2002-10-03 03:21 PM

im very glad you enjoyed this..

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