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Saunni
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0 posted 2002-09-27 11:02 PM


A Moment Of Silence

Some bow their heads while others are loaned a moment
Some begin it while the others end
I stop and reality breaks my heart
That not even a soul can mend...

The stillness always finds me when I'm already to the ground
And, I watch myself from the other side of heaven looking down
Surrounded in immense quiet everywhere
Just watching myself in an empty stare...

Going nowhere but always in search for my friend
As duty calls and I'm left with what I see
A little life falls with every tear in his name
Oh, you just don't know how hard it is to breathe...

Especially when I inhale sorrows plan
And, when missing him has both my hands
I'm on the other side of heaven looking down
And, on the edge of lonely I can be found...

It's a moment of silence that I never expected
I didn't have time to fold my hands in prayer
Not a warning that I can remember at all
Just all of the sudden he was there...

So, I gather so broken pieces of me
Go back to the visions I silently see
Pride at my side I wipe away the tears
Oh, I sure look sad from up here...

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

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Irie
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1 posted 2002-09-27 11:28 PM


You know, this really made me think and take a quick glance at my life.
Now I must go and take a harder look.

Thank you Saunni, for this fantasticly penned, thought provoking piece!

~Sheri

"Don't wait for your ship to come in ...
Swim out to it"

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2 posted 2002-09-27 11:40 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Saunni, this sounds so very sad, sweet friend, I hope everything is alright and now these tears are out of your heart, my thoughts and heart go out to you and may you find that cloud on the bright side of heaven to bask upon, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-09-30 12:44 PM


Enjoyed...James
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4 posted 2002-09-30 08:20 AM


In that moment, I see that you knew your heart.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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