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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-09-27 08:07 PM


A Shared Romantic Night

Are your feelings growing just
the same as mine or will I
be all alone this time?
Will you kiss me baby?
Can you do it right?
Will I fulfil your
needs on a shared
romantic night?
Help me to understand
what I need to do
so I can kiss you honey.
So I can be with you.

JamesLee
Sept28
2002
TwoDozen
Roses


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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2002-09-27 08:26 PM


Give her this poem, and I can assure you, you will not be alone this night!---and ohhh, those kisses will be given just right!

~ ooo la laaing ~
EA

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-09-27 08:56 PM


James...forget the roses..just give her this poem.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-09-27 09:11 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, just give her this poem as I know she is destined to sigh! (big hugggsssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2002-09-28 12:28 PM


James - One dozen will do nicely. Lovely write...

BC

Paddy
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since 2002-09-23
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Straya
5 posted 2002-09-28 08:00 AM


Hi James

I'm longing to hear why she remains aloof. With words like these how could she? But I agree with Enchantress, forget the roses, your words say more.

I guess one becomes content with one’s poetry when one opens the book ten years hence and does NOT exclaim,
“Did I really write this?”


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