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Moonlight Romeo
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0 posted 2002-09-27 03:40 PM


She moves, my Love, in waves of perfect Auburn Moonlight.
Waves that flicker and touch my soul like fire,
That touh my body with hands of softest silence.
She moves in ways that quicken my beating heart,
Sharing with me her lines of love, always spoken
In her voice, that Siren's voice that gives our love words.

My heart hears her voice, as my eyes feel her words
Of dancing in ecstasy beneath our moonlight.
Here, we share the secrets of love, always and never spoken.
The meadows blaze for far and wide with our love's fire
As we two join together to become one heart.
Then, when comes the dawn, the echo of love's silence.

And, in the crystalline of that always fragile silence,
My lips part slowly to speak to her in lover's words.
To you, Dear One, to you I give this, my only heart.
Here, in our secret time, where sunlight meets moonlight,
Where cool of moon's ray gives way to heat of sun's fire,
I give to you my heart, and these words, still not spoken.

And when, Dear One, these words have been spoken,
Let there not come from your lips only silence;
But let there come from them the warmth of love's fire.
Told in your most delicate and passionate words.
Shared with me now as were shared with me in moonlight,
Giving to me the fullest measure of your heart.

Then, Dear One, when we give to the other our heart,
Let our word be the only one that remains spoken.
Let our love be forever heard in the Auburn Moonlight,
Dispelling forever that black and darkest silence
With the power of our deep and passionate words;
Setting the trees of that forest bright with our fire.

And when we feel, Dear One, when we feel that fire,
It will indeed make of our lives one truest heart.
A love that cannot be expressed in these mere words.
A love that cannot by spoiled lips yet be spoken.
But, a love that is felt by us in our silence
Here now, Dear One, here in our Auburn Moonlight.

And, in our Auburn Moonlight, touched by love's new fire,
There will forever be our silence, heard by our one true heart,
Now that love can be spoken by feelings more powerful than words.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

© Copyright 2002 Moonlight Romeo - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-27 03:56 PM


"And, in our Auburn Moonlight, touched by love's new fire,
There will forever be our silence, heard by our one true heart,
Now that love can be spoken by feelings more powerful than words."




(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may the soft fires of romance and pure love burn slow like caramel with timeless afterglow, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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2 posted 2002-09-27 04:05 PM


Remarkable..absolutely remarkable.
Very much a moonlight sonata...
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

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3 posted 2002-09-27 04:37 PM


I like your Auburn Moonlight!
Love like this comes only once in a life time....
Hang on to it with all of your might!

~Sheri

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Swim out to it"

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4 posted 2002-09-27 07:52 PM


Enjoyed...James
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5 posted 2002-09-27 10:26 PM


M.Romeo - simply lovely. Chris

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6 posted 2002-09-28 11:53 AM


Hello, My Darling Sunshine. How wonderful to see your words here. I am sorry for not replying as much lately. I'm always here reading you...loving you.. I think this is your most passionate yet.

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2002-09-28 01:19 PM


Moonlight Romeo - nice romantic write, Auburn Moonlight, a most catching title...

BC

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8 posted 2002-09-29 11:27 AM


Very lovely, thank you for sharing such beauty with us....

Lauren~

I need some distraction
...oh beautiful release
Memories seep from my veins

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9 posted 2002-09-29 12:03 PM



A Moonlight Romeo you truly are! I just read your poem a second time! Oooo la la ---you write oflove and romance so very well!---A very enjoyable read!

EA

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10 posted 2002-09-29 12:16 PM


for me, it's
"She moves, my Love, in waves of perfect Auburn Moonlight.
Waves that flicker and touch my soul like fire,"

*sigh*

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11 posted 2002-09-29 12:20 PM


Magnificent!
ThisDiamond

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12 posted 2002-09-29 12:31 PM


A very beautiful and enjoyable read sir poet.  Well done.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Moonlight Romeo
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13 posted 2002-09-30 08:38 AM


Thank you all.  My Auburn Moonlight shines nightly in my sky, and I watch her always.

Thank you again.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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