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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-09-27 02:32 PM

Sweet Dessert

let me touch
your pain
ease
this hurt
I too
have drunk
salty tears
in sorrow’s concert
I have felt
so small
and quite alone
where silence
can literally
rattle
your bones
in your heart
lives
sheer poetry
the very sigh
of life
wanting to be
set free
so let me
help you
in your pain
share the burden
of your hurt
and I shall
drink your tears
as a
friend’s dessert

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (09-27-2002 05:57 PM).]

The Crimson Knight
Member

since 2002-09-16

Posts 57
Reno, NV

1 posted 2002-09-27 02:38 PM

Interesting idea, but a salty dessert, usually desserts are sweet,
Maybe those salty tears could be appetizers with sweetness coming after you ease the pain and sooth the hurt.
Just a thought, liked the poem

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2002-09-27 07:38 PM

Like this...James

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

3 posted 2002-09-27 10:55 PM

Helen~ A very wonderful poem. Enjoyed.
To share the hurt and drink the tears traits of a true friend...Paul

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2002-09-27 11:12 PM

helen - you leave many thoughts...

BC

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-09-27 11:46 PM

(big hugggssssss) Yes, and may the salty tears like a jawbreaker slowly reveal a sweet soft center of replenished joy and hope for you! (sigh) This is touching, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

secretlife
Member

since 2002-07-30

Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,

6 posted 2002-09-28 04:32 AM

It's just perfect... I felt that my body was trembled when I read your poems..It's a very nice thoughts... (Sweet Dessert)
secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

7 posted 2002-09-28 09:38 AM

Loved this pense. The blending of yearn and promise.

A fine write

~Ed

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".

~wranx~

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