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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 2002-09-27 05:51 AM


the tram came dancing
a few minutes later than yesterday
and certainly more filled
carrying scores of humans
with exasperated looks
like hordes of worker bees
buzzing their busy lives away

were they vexed because they were
all collectively late
may be because there were
simply too many of them

why can’t they all be somewhere else
was the singular polarized thought
that tore through my mind

but that thought
was quickly drowned
by a sweet lilac scent
that flew my way
making my head turn
and my eyes ogle
at a bright face
and refreshing eyes

that’s when she smiled
probably provoked by my stare
she asked ‘is all well?’

sheepishly I answered
‘I’m fine. thank you.'
'just a little inconvenienced



© Copyright 2002 Sudhir Iyer - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-09-27 06:50 AM



We never do tell the whole truth when
beauty smacks us in the face, do we?
Enjoyed the read, Sudhir!

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-09-27 11:26 AM




(smiles) Oh Sudhir, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, beauty is so hard to describe and it can always overwhelm us so then we don't know what we are saying! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-09-27 11:41 AM


Wow!  Sudhir...you brought this picture to life.
Fantastic imagery contained in this piece.
Much enjoyed my friend.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Krishankins
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4 posted 2002-09-27 11:50 AM


Wonderful, Sudhir!! People worry too much about the things they can't change. It's nice to see that someone can make light of such an inconvenience!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2002-09-27 07:26 PM


Like this one a lot Sudhir...very nice...James
Sudhir Iyer
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6 posted 2002-09-30 04:00 AM


Many thanks... I am glad that you all enjoyed this one...

The tram ride today was eventless... nothing to write about...

Regards,
Sudhir

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