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Kitty**
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Charlottesville,VA USA

0 posted 2002-09-26 11:59 PM



Think I'll let my mind slip away
and live in yesterday.
I'll leave this old world far behind.
Forget all I ever knew, this is
what I want to do. For in yesterday
I know I would be fine.

I am slipping, slowly slipping.
I can't stop and I don't know what to do.
I can't hold on anymore, I'm not the same as before,
I am slipping, daily slipping, far from you.

I have no reason to hold on, I can't seem to go on.
Clinging to a dream that was never real.
Destiny played it's role, It left me in the cold,
so back into a yeasteday I will steal.

I am slipping, slowly slipping.
Back to a time when I thought you might have cared.
That was so long ago now that's where I want to go.
Back to a time when I believed my dreams you shared.

* That which gives light, must endure burning *

© Copyright 2002 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
Miah
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since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062
Pennsylvania
1 posted 2002-09-27 12:13 PM


Very sad poem.  Thanks for sharing this with us.  
Paddy
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since 2002-09-23
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Straya
2 posted 2002-09-27 12:07 PM


I'm taking a punt here that whoever you wrote this to has read it. I do hope so. What a wonderful admission. It's impossible to tell if your dreams were the same as his but I relate to the option that perhaps they weren't. I hope it works/worked out. Thanks for sharing.

I guess one becomes content with one’s poetry when one opens the book ten years hence and does NOT exclaim, “Did I really write this?”

Krishankins
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3 posted 2002-09-27 02:41 PM


I have often taken those trips into yesterdays. They're nice. Until they bring you back to todays. Nice one Kitty!!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2002-09-27 03:27 PM


My heart is breaking as I read your words of sorrow. You just opened up and let your emotions flow out onto paper. It takes a brave soul to bare one's self to all. Have you shown this to him? Your words could even melt an iceberg!

~ sending you a little hug from across the miles ~

Linda

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