Sissy Fuss ---- bSen squirrel-blaze co-challenge

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Open Poetry #22

Sissy Fuss ---- bSen squirrel-blaze co-challenge

brian sites
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since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
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0 posted 2002-09-26 11:37 PM

    slap of bird wing to face
the wait of bolder
    re-places
      shoulder
        wet
push up a groan
upset a moan tainted
                tense-sweat
fight it
      all away

exert
inertia
subvert a vertical
   clime with hot
    windywords
in other wards--
a
   chamois
   charlatan
   shared a ton

                  removed
                      objected
                  bipedaled pebble reflecting
                        crested insights

the tiny stone is steeped
                     in mouth
                        reaping
                      mineral bathos
gnosis in scoliosis
bent with torrential
scree of energy
landslide's potential--
                      loosened

erode back
   down
the still
   side

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-09-26 11:50 PM

I'm not sure I understood this one. I did get this visual of a tiny Atlas-strength ant--onward, upward, one step at a time...

Again...not sure about the intent, but don't mind me...not sure about much tonight. But I LIKE the idea of an Atlas Ant. *smile*

brian sites
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since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
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2 posted 2002-09-27 01:31 AM

Karen?
you have WAY too much on your plate now
to be wondering what this crap means
peace to you, sweetheart
try to get some sleep
ok?
love you

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-09-27 11:55 AM

Are you talking about mercury is retrograde, here? As in, Hg within thermometers and not the planet. If so, lol, I made the same mistake originally.

Loved this, bri.

brian sites
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since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
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4 posted 2002-09-27 12:37 PM

*snorting coffee out the nose*
OW!
no Mike, I'm laughing WITH you

seriously though
that challenge was for Karen
this was the
Go Write Something
challenge
that you guys laid on me
and my lazy butt thanks you
Burning Sinus

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-09-27 02:38 PM

Aaaah,
THAT challenge.

Well met.

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