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vandana
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0 posted 2002-09-26 07:49 PM


I didn't get a chance
It has been a long time
I wanted It
To tell you
Something,
always wanted
Gotta to tell you
That I love you
From bottom of my heart
I know
I know you well
I never felt like this before
Wanted to say these words
All the way
All the words
Gotta to tell you
Right now
This Is the time
I know
You would understand
How much I love you
Gotta to tell you
This Is the time
To tell you
Gotta to tell you
somehow......



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Krishankins
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1 posted 2002-09-26 07:50 PM


The words get the urgency across very well!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2002-09-26 07:51 PM


Sent right to the heart. Bravo. ThisDiamond
Enchantress
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3 posted 2002-09-26 07:52 PM


Very good write Vandana!
~hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2002-09-26 08:06 PM


vandana - I'm sure if he reads this, he will know your heart...

BC

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5 posted 2002-09-26 09:03 PM




(smiles) Oh Vandana, this is beautiful, I too hope he understands your loving pleas and he reaches out to you with true love forever! (kiss on cheek) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-09-26 10:54 PM


I've felt this urgency before many times
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