Open Poetry #22 |
Haiku or Senyru??? |
Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Just over the fence Upon the far mountain's peak My dreams wait for me I often forget which is which. Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Kris... I love these as well and never can remember the rules for them or which is which either. I'm sure someone will come along and set us straight. This one is very beautiful! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
very cool. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Krishankins - I'm not sure either, but it's a fine poem... BC |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Admiring the comparison here Chris...so you! ThisDiamond |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sen Sen Senryu.... Senryu deals with everything in a 5-7-5 syllable count that has nothing to do with nature... Haiku is strictly nature...no human reference or material reference should be made... |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Thanks Sunshine. I thought it went that way, but you know how guys are about asking for directions!! Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Kristopher, I love this, sweet friend, it is funny too and sometimes I get senryus and haikus mixed up too, but this is a gorgeous senryu! (big hugggsssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Softly floating Senyru. Sandra |
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