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T
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0 posted 2002-09-26 12:07 PM


Forever entwined
Forbidden pleasures realized
Twisted souls yearning for more
Not to be abandoned
Never to be forgotten
Painful love, the price.

                            T.

[This message has been edited by T (09-26-2002 12:30 PM).]

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bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-09-26 12:31 PM


Ooh.
Ah.
The colors.

I enjoyed this, T. Nice twistin' ending.

Mike

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2 posted 2002-09-26 01:04 PM



Sounds like one should look deep before one leaps-----into bed! tehe

Take care--always!

EA

Rosebud1229
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3 posted 2002-09-26 02:00 PM


very nice poem, so few words with so much meaning.
Enchantress
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4 posted 2002-09-26 02:42 PM


Very very sensual....enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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5 posted 2002-09-26 03:00 PM


I like it when they make it hurt so good!! Nice job with this shortie!! I enoyed it, T!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

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6 posted 2002-09-26 04:55 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is beautifully sensual and bittersweet, BRAVO, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet T, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

BtwnRockandHardPlace
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7 posted 2002-09-26 05:05 PM


short, sweet, perfect.
Tiersdin
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8 posted 2002-09-26 07:35 PM


Nicely done!

Enjoyed!
~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Bill Charles
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9 posted 2002-09-26 08:07 PM


T - nice write...

BC

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10 posted 2002-09-26 08:08 PM


welcome to passions enjoyed
Irie
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11 posted 2002-09-27 12:25 PM


Forever entwined...
...painful love, the price.
Ouch!
A sad love story indeed.
I could feel the pain bleed from your pen!

Well Done T

~Sheri

"Don't wait for your ship to come in ...
Swim out to it"

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12 posted 2002-09-27 12:20 PM


The pain of love, when love is denied.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Hearts_Dance
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13 posted 2002-09-30 02:26 PM


I have read so much sadness today.
Painful love is not easy, but at times it seems to
be the hardest let go of.

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