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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-09-26 11:55 AM


With brevity
so much       can be said
in so few              words

but sometimes

this is when our words
     are heard
the  
            LOUDEST


If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (09-26-2002 11:59 AM).]

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Irie
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1 posted 2002-09-26 01:30 PM


With Brevity, I say OUTSTANDING!

~Sheri

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Swim out to it"

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2 posted 2002-09-26 02:48 PM


How very very true Donna...
Beautifully said.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Krishankins
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3 posted 2002-09-26 03:03 PM


In it's finest form!!!!!!
Nicely done!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

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4 posted 2002-09-26 03:57 PM




(smiles) Oh Donna, I love this, and your wonderful words always speak loudly with such heart and smiles! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2002-09-26 04:56 PM



yes
EA

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2002-09-26 06:01 PM


Full agreement...nicely put. ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2002-09-26 07:13 PM


Amen to this!! Wonderful. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Bill Charles
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8 posted 2002-09-26 07:38 PM


Gentle Spirit - it seems when I write brevity, they say the most...

BC

Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2002-09-27 09:07 AM


Again, my thanks to all.  Sometimes we say so much with so little and the message really hits home then.  Hugs and peace.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

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