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bsquirrel's challenge Tired Dribblings...
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bsquirrel's challenge Tired Dribblings... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Tired Dribblings From a Cracked Pen. My medication was off which could be a dangerous scenario in fact quite more certain than a walk through the barrio. My sugar registered quite high yet my mood far from sweet, if given any challenge I’d not stayed on my feet. The error’s been corrected I feel so much more inclined to write or to labor given opportunity while there’s time. It was a mistake, I feel certain though not admitted quite as such but at least I’m still kicking and not so out of touch. Yesterday, though, was a rough one for me I didn’t feel like writing or even having tea. I worked a bit on banking clerical, rote energies Walked a couple of errands to combat sugar’s destiny. When the day had fairly ended I found I’d had no yen to even scribble tired dribblings from a poet’s cracked pen. ©September 26, 2002 I hope it’s okay to add a word for the meter in the challenge phrase. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
This write reminds me of a dream where you are moving in slow motion no matter how hard you try. Nice one! Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Don't worry, VAS. A challenge would be boring if you couldn't change the rules.  I loved this. Sugar high. Sugar low. And your meter? Leaves mine sipping puddles in the street. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Virginia, I too love how you broke the rules here, sweet friend, this is wonderful and your pen indeed floods with precious thoughts here, well-done on the challenge, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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