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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2002-09-26 10:47 AM



I've been here now a day or two
Must say I'm still alive
I'm living here with ladies see
Up till now I've counted five

Time to get some men down here
I'm getting out of touch
But when I board a fishingboat
There will be men and such

But a fisherman I do not want
Unless he writes some poetry
When he throws in a fish or two
I'll hug him to death probably

But let me tell you my dear friends
I'm not as bad as it will appear
I'm just a Dutchie in need of hugs
From all you lovely Poets here

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

© Copyright 2002 Titia Geertman - All Rights Reserved
Krishankins
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1 posted 2002-09-26 10:50 AM


Hugs 2 U!! Nice write, Titia!!

Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!?

VAS
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2 posted 2002-09-26 10:56 AM


Cute, very cute! I just wonder how 5 ladies in a house can last before one of them pulls her hair out. hehehehe

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Toerag
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3 posted 2002-09-26 11:00 AM


Boy do I wish I was there with all you ladies in one house, (So I could sneak up there at night, put a red light outside on the porch and put a sign up that read: "House of Passions"........)....Oh wait, that may be misleading...ya think?....Hope you all have a wonderful time....(If Balladeer says mean and nasty things about me please let me know...okay?)
Sunshine
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4 posted 2002-09-26 12:14 PM



Knuffles!!!!

Muys
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5 posted 2002-09-26 12:34 PM


Zoals het klokje thuis tikt "tikt het nergen.
Translate on my way.
Come the clock tich at home he tick nohere.
Mamma

[This message has been edited by Muys (09-26-2002 12:36 PM).]

SmartChick
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6 posted 2002-09-26 02:40 PM


Well Titia, I am sending lots of Knuffles!!!!

And, I have more if you need them.
I wish I could have been there to give you one in person. Have fun!!!!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2002-09-26 02:50 PM


Titia,
Very cute, enjoyed the read.

Enchantress
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8 posted 2002-09-26 02:58 PM


Cute write Titia!!
Sounds like you're having fun!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2002-09-26 04:47 PM




(BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) Oh Titia, you are so special to us all and I am so happy you are having a wonderful time, yay!!! (kiss on cheek) I can't wait to hear more from you, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

NewEnglandlazurlu
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10 posted 2002-09-26 05:10 PM




Ahhhh...five women in one house. I can't even imagine what the bathroom wait must be. It must take hours and hours to get ready to go out. Do you draw straws to see what order you use it?

So glad you are having fun. We're holding down the blue fort, so keep checking in with us.

Hugs, Marti

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11 posted 2002-09-26 08:59 PM


Five ladies in the house? Oh, my!!
Sounds like you need me and Sy!
Tampa-bound we almost are
Packing up the trusty car..
Hang on, dutchie, knuffels come
Everybody's getting some!!!!

Mother_Earth
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12 posted 2002-09-26 11:15 PM


Titia, I can relate! I have 4 daughters then me.  We did EVERTHING together.  Sometimes not good.  Lots of hugs coming your way and you can share if you want.  Have a group hug on me,  ME
Titia Geertman
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13 posted 2002-09-26 11:18 PM



Thanks friends for your replies.

Toe you should pack your things man
Get your butt here as fast as you can
Balladeer you're too late already I fear
Because Marge's Bill did beat you here
He got hugged all this afternoon
So if you want knuffels, get here soon


Titia


Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (09-26-2002 11:19 PM).]

JamesMichael
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14 posted 2002-09-27 07:55 PM


Hope you can write one called Five Ladies and Five Men...James
Midnitesun
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15 posted 2002-09-27 10:14 PM


LOL, where are all the men?
Toe, why aren't you down there?
those ladies are crying out to be rescued!

Balladeer
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16 posted 2002-09-28 08:44 AM


They are not crying any more. BALLADEER has arrived!!!!

You're calling Toe?

Never send a boy to do a man's job!!

MiniGuitarMan
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since 2002-09-01
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17 posted 2002-10-01 01:48 PM


I arrived with my sweetheart, Marge
Instructions from her I always take
She said I could give LOTS of HUGS
so I did, for goodness sake!

Now the gals are satisfied
they need no other man
MiniGuitarMan satisfied their needs
like a GOOD MAN always can!

I left them all smiling
with a promise I'd be back
For when it comes to women
no skills do I lack!

Bring it on over to DeLand, girls
when you yearn for more
I can deliver all I promise
on that you can keep score!

Had a wonderful time and I thank you ladies for inviting me and letting me sing and play for you!
HUGS!
Bill

Titia Geertman
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18 posted 2002-10-02 03:15 PM



Thanks guys, I must say Bill did a very good job there. He's not only a good singer and guitar player, he can hug very well too I must say.

Balladeer don't fret on my cousin Toereg, he's entitled to a big hug from his cousin Kneerag LOL, there will be plenty left for you.

Bill, did you wrote that yourself???
Hey man, that's cool. Does that mean Marge has to watch a ballgame now??

Love your guys to death, wished I could just stretch out my arms to reach you.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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